若能押韵更好。<br><br>比方说:<br><br>夜<br>难<span style='color:green'>眠</span>,<br>月儿<span style='color:green'>弯</span>,<br>梧桐枝斜,<br>听风敲窗<span style='color:green'>阑</span>,<br>揽披<span style='color:green'>肩,</span>移金<span style='color:green'>莲</span><br>却与影儿把盏<span style='color:green'>谈</span> 。<br><br>另,平仄有变化更上口。还可以考虑换几个字。<br><br> |